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G3

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Civilian industrial truck
« on: June 10, 2008, 10:01:16 am »


CnC please
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hihosilver

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Re: Civilian industrial truck
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 02:00:13 am »
That's a very nice start.  I especially like the render/texturing.
Right now, the front of the truck is too organic.  I feel it could definitely use some edge reinforcement.  For some reason the front also looks a bit stretched.  The wheels could perhaps use a texture with a little more noise or something, as right now the tires look a little skinny and more like balloons.
It's looking fabulous though.  Keep up the good work!
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falloffalot

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Re: Civilian industrial truck
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 03:36:43 am »
Truck looks great. Hiho is spot on with: the front not looking quite right and a little insect like.
Could we have some other angles and an un-textured view?
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