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[Mreenav D]

This is the second model i've made myself from scratch "a car".Please feel free to comment .

[Mreenav D]

Here is a update 

[lizeal93]

great for a second model. the geometry looks very poor. you might want to look at some car-making tutorials to learn proper edgelooping. although there techniquly isn't anything called proper. b/c this is an art form. i would recommend when trying to make something appear semi realistic to use a reference image to get correct proportions.

hey! dont' take all this to heart. for a second model this is amazing you should'ce seen the garbage i was churning out when i first started. your is a picassa in comparison.

great work don't get discouraged! keep it up.

[xalener]

Can we get more views of it? Front, Back, Top?

[Mreenav D]

Can we get more views of it? Front, Back, Top?

Sure

[3Dgeek11]

These newest views you've given us look great! I never made anything like this on my second model!

Though, I do have a few things to "constructively crticize".

That being, the hood looks too slanted, and "fat", the car windows look very "sloppily" made, and the top of the car is a little rugged. But don't take that badly, as I said above, this model is ultra extremely awesome for someone's second model!
3Dgeek

[lizeal93]

well these new pictures definitly bring things into a new light (no pun intended) and the model looks much better off than before.

amazing for the first model the lighting in the original picture was sorely lacking and made the polygons look more out of shape than they actually were. 

[Mreenav D]

Er... As a matter of fact, I rebuilt the first model.

[TheMasonX]

It looks great, much better than the stuff I was first producing. Cars still give me trouble (don't even mention organics). I would recommend something that everybody gets on their first post. When you render an image, check the anti-aliasing tool. It gets rid of those jagged lines, and drasticly improves the quality of the image, and is almost always worth the extra time rendering.

[lizeal93]

oh.

well i'm glad you reworked it that quickly. it definitely paid off:)