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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: mr. winky on July 13, 2008, 06:11:21 pm

Title: flower
Post by: mr. winky on July 13, 2008, 06:11:21 pm

I made this flower for a project and I was wondering if anyone had any constructive criticism

Title: Re: flower
Post by: Mactetra on July 13, 2008, 08:04:03 pm

i really like it! you should add more.. uhm.. those coloured leaves around the scenter of the flower, 3 is a bit to few for a realistic flower.

Title: Re: flower
Post by: Tanzim on July 14, 2008, 07:26:51 am

Darken the stem, and add a few more leaves.

Title: Re: flower
Post by: devilGames on July 14, 2008, 07:40:00 am

@mactetra, PETALS

Title: Re: flower
Post by: Mactetra on July 16, 2008, 04:27:05 pm

Quote from: devilGames on July 14, 2008, 07:40:00 am

@mactetra, PETALS

thanks :)

Any update on the flower?

Title: Re: flower
Post by: dstritt on July 16, 2008, 06:40:21 pm

I have to agree on darkening the stem, and more petals, but only if you are going for super realism. Remember, computer graphics can do anything, not just real things. If you wanted to go for a cartoon (realistic cartoon though) look, you did real well. I especially like the texture work on the petals, very "flowery"  ;)