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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: dube1503 on July 13, 2008, 05:06:40 pm

Title: My first finished project
Post by: dube1503 on July 13, 2008, 05:06:40 pm

This is my very first post.  Im a newb but ive had anim8tor for about 6 months now and i just like to doodle with it,  this is my first project ive actually fully finished,  its still not great by any means though.
(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x49/dube1503/knife.jpg)

and here is the wireframe
(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x49/dube1503/wireframe_knife.jpg)

critisism and comments are welcome  :)

Title: Re: My first finished project
Post by: Tanzim on July 14, 2008, 07:54:23 am

I'll only criticize you one your modeling, the sides have unnecessary polygons.
See this: http://vele-bit.hr/mario/an8-tutorial/

Title: Re: My first finished project
Post by: dube1503 on July 14, 2008, 01:41:25 pm

yea,   i started cutting faces to give it a curve and idk why i made some of those cuts,    but thank u for the tutorial    i will most definately use it =]

Title: Re: My first finished project
Post by: siragin on July 14, 2008, 02:19:14 pm

it looks like some kind of sword, so you should make the side that's pointed to the ground sharp by mearging the points so they are not flat. if they are sorry, but tey look flat from the position you rendered from.

Title: Re: My first finished project
Post by: dube1503 on July 15, 2008, 03:25:23 pm

yea   i did merge them but i was trying to experiment with the camera angle which i dont think helped at all