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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: G3 on June 10, 2008, 10:01:16 am

Title: Civilian industrial truck
Post by: G3 on June 10, 2008, 10:01:16 am

(http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/8936/dumpers2cg4.jpg)

CnC please

Title: Re: Civilian industrial truck
Post by: hihosilver on June 11, 2008, 02:00:13 am

That's a very nice start.  I especially like the render/texturing.
Right now, the front of the truck is too organic.  I feel it could definitely use some edge reinforcement.  For some reason the front also looks a bit stretched.  The wheels could perhaps use a texture with a little more noise or something, as right now the tires look a little skinny and more like balloons.
It's looking fabulous though.  Keep up the good work!

Title: Re: Civilian industrial truck
Post by: falloffalot on June 11, 2008, 03:36:43 am

Truck looks great. Hiho is spot on with: the front not looking quite right and a little insect like.
Could we have some other angles and an un-textured view?