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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: LIL ZEBOS on January 11, 2019, 08:22:46 pm

Title: My recent Anim8or render
Post by: LIL ZEBOS on January 11, 2019, 08:22:46 pm

 ;D

Title: Re: My recent Anim8or render
Post by: Steve on January 12, 2019, 08:19:45 am

Nice work, LIL ZEBOS. Organic objects can be difficult to render well.

Title: Re: My recent Anim8or render
Post by: LIL ZEBOS on January 12, 2019, 01:25:20 pm

Thanks  8)
& Yeah i agree with you on that one, especially texturing & light  ;)

Title: Re: My recent Anim8or render
Post by: davdud101 on January 18, 2019, 10:47:06 am

Looks quite darned good, LIL ZEBOS, I really love how the reflection in the cup seems to show MORE of the 'scene' around that's out of view.

If you're wanting constructive criticism, I feel as if a higher-density/higher res bumpmap on the bread/buns themselves, as well as on the table and wall, could go a long way to making those parts of the scene look more realistic.
There also look to be some little bumpmapped lines on the plate - not sure if these are meant to be scratches? but when I think of scratches on a plate from a knife, they tend to but very thin and not very deep. Otherwise they end up looking like gouges!

A touch of ambient occlusion (to increase the darkness in the shadows where the objects are closest together) and you're well on your way!

Nice work thus far - and welcome if I haven't said it already!