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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: jaguar42l on July 26, 2013, 07:52:44 am
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Hello,
Here are some famous cars.
(http://i965.photobucket.com/albums/ae139/jaguar42/lambo.jpg) (http://s965.photobucket.com/user/jaguar42/media/lambo.jpg.html)
(http://i965.photobucket.com/albums/ae139/jaguar42/jaguar.jpg) (http://s965.photobucket.com/user/jaguar42/media/jaguar.jpg.html)
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Good job, jaguar42l!
The detailing is great on the last one, that mustve been a lot of work to figure out (unless you own the car of course ;) )
One thing that does stand out is that the smoothing on the panels doesn't come out too well. I can't judge on the third one, it's all black so hard to make out, but the first two cars dont seem too smooth. This is probably because it is a mesh without subdivisions. If you want to improve the jagged edges and smooth the car out, have a look at subdivision modeling.
Also, the environment takes a bit away from the models. I would suggest either putting them in a studio environment or make a more detailed environment than just a few panels with photo's on them.
Good work though, especially the third car is impressive.
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Looks cool! :) ;D 8)
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Great work, nice pair of rare Lamborghinis and lovely E Type. I agree with $imon re the surface subdivision and seeing them in a studio environment. The detailing on the Jag is very good, I'd love to see a clay render. The Lambos appear to be simpler, something like what might be used in a game, is this the plan? I'd also work on the duco (paint work), it appears a bit flat. Car duco is a particularly difficult thing to get right - too shiny and it looks like plastic, too dull and it looks sand-blasted - there are some tutorials about that might help. The Espada at least doesn't appear to have a modelled interior, only inside shots rendered on the glass (or is that a too-high refractive index on the glass material warping the perspective?). I'd love to see the Espada in particular brought up to a high level of detail, such a beautiful and rare vehicle deserves it! Excellent work, I'd love to see more.
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Nice corvette, and is that a Chevelle?
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Hello all,
The lambos are less detailed than the jag (I own this one, it's from 1966). I will try subdivision, but I'am not sure my old PC will support it!