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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: davdud101 on November 24, 2010, 11:10:09 pm

Title: Trombone Model
Post by: davdud101 on November 24, 2010, 11:10:09 pm

I'm a trombonist, so it came pretty natural to wanna build one. My renders are below:
(http://i908.photobucket.com/albums/ac285/davdud101/Trombone_rend3.jpg)
(http://i908.photobucket.com/albums/ac285/davdud101/Trombone_rend2.jpg)
(http://i908.photobucket.com/albums/ac285/davdud101/Trombone_rend1.jpg)
Put about 4 1/2 hours into it total, was working until 11:00PM. Tell me what you think!!!

Title: Re: Trombone Model
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on November 25, 2010, 04:59:57 pm

Nice work! I like the chromey look, shiny objects :D

But only a few things, in some areas the texture seems a bit dull, the start bit and the open bit at the end (technical terms obviously)
And I don't know if it's just me not knowing what a trombone looks like but to me the open end bit looks a bit thin.

Other than that, aweshum!

Title: Re: Trombone Model
Post by: davdud101 on November 25, 2010, 09:15:41 pm

Yup, ur totally right about the (tech term) bell being quite thin.... I knew I shoulda fixed that. I'll see what I can do about that...

Title: Re: Trombone Model
Post by: 3Dgeek11 on November 26, 2010, 12:44:48 pm

Wow! That looks great! But the.."bell" does need a little extra work. ;)

It's a great model, though! And nice renders. :)