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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: dkobol on October 04, 2009, 08:24:20 am

Title: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 04, 2009, 08:24:20 am

here it it, eggplant from tutorial, upgraded a bit.
(http://www.shrani.si/t/1N/SS/3EN9M8I8/rozica.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?1N/SS/3EN9M8I8/rozica.jpg)
my skills are still very low, but it's a start

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: lynn22 on October 04, 2009, 09:58:43 am

It's looking pretty.
Why not try again to add some leaves, it would look even prettier ;)

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 05, 2009, 04:17:05 am

here are the leaves.
(http://www.shrani.si/t/36/CD/aFQMNwl/rozicazlisti2.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?36/CD/aFQMNwl/rozicazlisti2.jpg)
(http://www.shrani.si/t/3n/DT/4xHDyik3/rozicazlisti.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?3n/DT/4xHDyik3/rozicazlisti.jpg)

ok enough of that flower. i'll try to make tree trunk next.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 06, 2009, 05:53:26 am

(http://www.shrani.si/t/3R/ow/3Cr1eNru/klop2.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?3R/ow/3Cr1eNru/klop2.jpg)
here it is, my next creation. bench in a park. i tried to add lamp also, but i need to see few tutorials about iluminations first.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: Kubajzz on October 06, 2009, 10:10:11 am

I really like the bench model, but the ground texture makes me feel a bit dizzy :)

I don't know if it was intentional, but it creates a very interesting Escher-ish effect...

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: lynn22 on October 06, 2009, 12:34:15 pm

I agree, the modeling is very good but the texturing could use some improvement.

Try reducing the grass and the stones size to a more proportionate size.

To do this, select the grass or stone faces, click on the UV button and within the yellow circle, drag your mouse diagonally while holding the middle button pressed.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 06, 2009, 01:49:47 pm

thanks for your feedback, it gives me motivation to keep modeling. for grass textures, i know they suck, but i couldnt make them better. i'll try again later.
And for Escher-ish effect, it was unintentional, probably just ortho look made it.

Edit: here are improved textures.
(http://www.shrani.si/t/14/gW/UJRE3VR/klop1.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?14/gW/UJRE3VR/klop1.jpg)

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: Dreadkb on October 06, 2009, 10:53:14 pm

Looking a lot better.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: Arik_the_Red on October 06, 2009, 11:18:52 pm

Off to a great start there, dkobol! I like how readily you take on the suggestions... those leaves on your plant came out nicely formed.

The park bench is pretty good, too... and you're showing a fine adaptation to the use of textures.

All in all, very cool, especially considering these are your very first works.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: lynn22 on October 07, 2009, 03:20:26 am

Almost perfect ;)

The grass is perfect but the stones show stripes and it is not your fault, it's the texture image that has one edge showing darker than the rest and that is what creates the stripes in your image.

Here's a brick image that will tile better.

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 07, 2009, 11:16:19 am

ok, my next creation. it's no big deal, little encampment.
(http://www.shrani.si/t/2a/9t/25H7WZgd/kamp.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?2a/9t/25H7WZgd/kamp.jpg)

here is guard tower
(http://www.shrani.si/t/2l/xr/1ofvOuBk/kamp2.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?2l/xr/1ofvOuBk/kamp2.jpg)

i think guard tower came out pretty good, but encampment on overall could be better.

waiting for your feedback, love you all (not in a weird way ;))

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 08, 2009, 02:49:30 am

low poly sword (320 faces)
(http://www.shrani.si/t/11/B0/4v3yq29Y/sword.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?11/B0/4v3yq29Y/sword.jpg)

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: dkobol on October 09, 2009, 01:33:32 pm

(http://www.shrani.si/t/2Z/Jj/hluqNDe/wheel.jpg) (http://www.shrani.si/?2Z/Jj/hluqNDe/wheel.jpg)

my last project, wheel of a car. maybe someday i'll manage to create whole car :D

Title: Re: my first on-my-own creation
Post by: TheRetroZombie on December 22, 2009, 10:46:37 pm

wow, you are a better beginner than me. Though I was using a old labtop and didn't know how to run Anim8or on Vista.

Title: my first on my own creation
Post by: toiguew09 on December 28, 2009, 07:27:44 pm

first question: can i use it? i been having trouble making my own as good as this, as all i know is bricks.
second question: if i can use it, can i use it in a commercial project?