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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Dreadkb on September 10, 2009, 12:07:22 am

Title: TGM - SSDD web comic
Post by: Dreadkb on September 10, 2009, 12:07:22 am
I have been kinda asked, kinda volunteered, to make a project for a web comic called S.S.D.D, but I'm a bit... crestfallen? I was asked to make the "TGM". It's a black whole drive of a ship. The ref art are the following: WARNING: some foul language
http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20070508.html (http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20070508.html)
http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20070510.html (http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20070510.html)
http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010910.html (http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010910.html)
http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010917.html (http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010917.html)
http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010924.html (http://www.poisonedminds.com/d/20010924.html)

I created this video and sent the artist a copy.
He says it seems "Pretty cool for a rough." I thought I was done. Does anyone have any idea what more I could do?
Title: Re: TGM - SSDD web comic
Post by: rellik420 on September 10, 2009, 01:54:29 am
at 1st i was going to say make  some textures. then i looked at ur 1st link and it looks just like the drawing. the only thing that i can see is that you could animate the transition to how it turns into a red orb thing. the drawings dont really tell much of a story. probably cause i dont know what the hell is going on. so i think you should fill in the blanks.
hope this helped.
Title: Re: TGM - SSDD web comic
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 10, 2009, 11:45:04 am
I think you could enahnce it by having some kind of mechanism working around it, such as a set of gears starting to spin or something similar, if you know what I mean?

Another idea would be to change the sound effects a little, and maybe add one of those loud blaring warning signals just before activation(?)
Title: Re: TGM - SSDD web comic
Post by: captaindrewi on September 10, 2009, 02:48:52 pm
the ungrateful munki....how about more dramatic lighting and more electricity lightning.
Title: Re: TGM - SSDD web comic
Post by: Dreadkb on September 10, 2009, 03:54:32 pm
I appreciate the input folks. I guess I'll keep messing with it and see if I can get some better results.