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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Mreenav D on June 29, 2009, 08:20:02 am

Title: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on June 29, 2009, 08:20:02 am

Hi guys, ive been working on this sr-71 in the past few days and the model is almost complete. Only the jets and the textures are left. Constructive criticism is welcome.  :D

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: kreator on June 29, 2009, 08:42:04 am

Whoo!! transparent Tailfins on that Blackbird!

 My C& C for what its worth... Just seems to be a load of Tubes and planes put together can you not give it a bit more detail?

just some of my old aircraft at
http://kevsworld.orgfree.com/html/anim8or.php

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Jehovahenker on June 29, 2009, 09:04:33 am

Quote from: Mreenav D on June 29, 2009, 08:20:02 am

Hi guys, ive been working on this sr-71 in the past few days and the model is almost complete. Only the jets and the textures are left. Constructive criticism is welcome.  :D

looks a lot better than your car ;)

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on June 29, 2009, 01:40:09 pm

Well ive got some updates, ive managed to make the smoke ,But where do i get the textures?

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Arik_the_Red on June 30, 2009, 03:37:14 am

I agree, better than the car, considering you are still quite new to the program, and not knowing your normal artistic aptitudes, I think it looks very good!

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on June 30, 2009, 01:38:42 pm

Thanks for the comments guys.

Another update -lighting  :o

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on July 01, 2009, 04:23:27 am

Heres another update -cockpit

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Jehovahenker on July 01, 2009, 05:23:15 am

very nice  :D

maybe you can try to make the smoke more in a point, so it doesnt look so 'fake', it doesnt end right now...;)

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on July 01, 2009, 06:35:41 am

Quote from: Jehovahenker on July 01, 2009, 05:23:15 am

very nice  :D

maybe you can try to make the smoke more in a point, so it doesnt look so 'fake', it doesnt end right now...;)

Thanks

  am working on it at this moment

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on July 01, 2009, 02:24:31 pm

Heres a short clip of the aircraft in motion (approx. 8 seconds).Extract it before viewing ;D

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: RudySchneider on July 01, 2009, 03:36:46 pm

Quote from: Mreenav D on July 01, 2009, 02:24:31 pm

Heres a short clip of the aircraft in motion...

Don't understand why you've got transparency turned on for your materials.  You should also consider using Terranim8or to create a more realistic exhaust trail.

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: Mreenav D on July 02, 2009, 03:21:37 am

I tried terrainim8or but the particles appear at odd places :-\

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: kreator on July 02, 2009, 05:01:07 am

Experiment with Terranim8or It WILL give good results.

TIP: don`t use the default Particles make some of your own.

I am with Rudy on this regards transparency, The only thing that needs to be transparent is the cockpit, Which looks huge for a Blackbird! I did mention in an earlier post regards tailplanes being transparent...

A longer animation of its flight would also be advantageous.
 

Title: Re: Of Aircrafts and Jets
Post by: 3Dgeek11 on July 02, 2009, 09:01:21 pm

You're doing really good!

I'm also working on a aircraft sort of thing. :)