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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Mreenav D on June 26, 2009, 03:29:10 am

Title: My second model: A car
Post by: Mreenav D on June 26, 2009, 03:29:10 am

This is the second model i've made myself from scratch "a car".Please feel free to comment .

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: Mreenav D on June 26, 2009, 04:27:17 am

Here is a update  8)

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: lizeal93 on June 26, 2009, 12:09:53 pm

great for a second model. the geometry looks very poor. you might want to look at some car-making tutorials to learn proper edgelooping. although there techniquly isn't anything called proper. b/c this is an art form. i would recommend when trying to make something appear semi realistic to use a reference image to get correct proportions.

hey! dont' take all this to heart. for a second model this is amazing you should'ce seen the garbage i was churning out when i first started. your is a picassa in comparison.

great work don't get discouraged! keep it up. :)

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: xalener on June 26, 2009, 10:46:39 pm

Can we get more views of it? Front, Back, Top?

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: Mreenav D on June 27, 2009, 02:23:26 am

Quote from: xalener on June 26, 2009, 10:46:39 pm

Can we get more views of it? Front, Back, Top?

Sure

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: 3Dgeek11 on June 28, 2009, 02:24:28 am

These newest views you've given us look great! I never made anything like this on my second model!

Though, I do have a few things to "constructively crticize".

That being, the hood looks too slanted, and "fat", the car windows look very "sloppily" made, and the top of the car is a little rugged. But don't take that badly, as I said above, this model is ultra extremely awesome for someone's second model! :)
3Dgeek

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: lizeal93 on June 28, 2009, 10:12:58 am

well these new pictures definitly bring things into a new light (no pun intended) and the model looks much better off than before.

amazing for the first model the lighting in the original picture was sorely lacking and made the polygons look more out of shape than they actually were. 

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: Mreenav D on June 28, 2009, 01:29:48 pm

Er... As a matter of fact, I rebuilt the first model. ;D

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: TheMasonX on June 28, 2009, 08:16:13 pm

It looks great, much better than the stuff I was first producing. Cars still give me trouble (don't even mention organics). I would recommend something that everybody gets on their first post. When you render an image, check the anti-aliasing tool. It gets rid of those jagged lines, and drasticly improves the quality of the image, and is almost always worth the extra time rendering.

Title: Re: My second model: A car
Post by: lizeal93 on June 28, 2009, 09:15:04 pm

oh.

well i'm glad you reworked it that quickly. it definitely paid off:)