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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Dager on March 23, 2009, 06:18:48 pm
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coment please! ;D
(http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6410/exprees.th.jpg) (http://img119.imageshack.us/my.php?image=exprees.jpg)
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Hey now, stop making faces at me!
Seriously though, very nice... Done from scratch? or based on a design, tutorial, etc...?
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Only crit at the moment is his(?) head is a bit pointy. Other than that great job.
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Beautiful work though I agree with Dreadkb about the head being a bit too pointy :)
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Could be a racial thing... as some skull structures vary greatly from others. But it does sort of have that look here...
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I wouldn't comment on the skull, I've seen a few strange looking people...
The smile, however, could use some work. Try pulling the edges of the mouth back as well as up.
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The model looks great. The expressions though could use a bit of work. Basically they all look too static; there isn't much expression shown. My biggest piece of advice would be to incorporate the eyes and eyelids. Your eyes have a ton to do with your expressions. If you look at someone's mouth, it can tell you a bit about their expression, but really the eyes hold a ton of information. Therefore, I would focus on incorporating the eyes as well into your expressions livening it up a bit.