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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Indian8or on November 17, 2008, 08:48:51 am

Title: WIP-Jaws of death
Post by: Indian8or on November 17, 2008, 08:48:51 am

Hi guys, working on this monster.  Wanted some advice.  It is just the start.   It needs a lot of work to have its final "AVATAR".

Many things may eventually change.

Title: Re: WIP-Jaws of death
Post by: SirBonovox on November 17, 2008, 04:25:14 pm

Nice job!!  If you're going for the dino look it looks really good!

The upper jaw is too flat.  It needs to curve to match the lower jaw.  I can't see the wireframe so I can't tell if it will have problems when Anim8ted but so far it looks great to me! 8)

Title: Re: WIP-Jaws of death
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on November 18, 2008, 03:16:44 pm

Another thing I think I remember from seeing dinosaur models, is a slight overhang of the upper lips, not sure though, looking awesome right now though.

Title: Re: WIP-Jaws of death
Post by: Indian8or on November 21, 2008, 10:45:21 am

The textured render of the dino.

Ugly Ha!!

Title: Re: WIP-Jaws of death
Post by: lynn22 on November 21, 2008, 11:20:27 am

He's starting to look really good.

Two small points though, I think that the corners of his mouth are placed too far towards the back of his head and if you were to close his mouth his teeth would not be covered because there does not seem to be anything to cover them ;)