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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: siragin on October 21, 2008, 06:16:52 pm

Title: office room
Post by: siragin on October 21, 2008, 06:16:52 pm

a small office scene that I am working on. I thought that I should just put it up to see what people think so far.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: jpcr on October 21, 2008, 06:35:35 pm

nice, but what is the "thing" against the wall ? a door?

Title: Re: office room
Post by: siragin on October 21, 2008, 07:31:26 pm

yea. I'm still working on the lights and texture. The wall behind the door and the wall that the door is on is blended together so you can't see the gap and space in between.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on October 22, 2008, 02:18:39 pm

one thing, strip lighting is usually inset, but good work so far.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: lynn22 on October 22, 2008, 05:23:51 pm

Nice work, though I would say that your chair looks a bit lost in proportion to the cubicles, lights and door  ;)

Title: Re: office room
Post by: thecolclough on October 23, 2008, 10:44:13 am

it's a bit weird (esp the lights), but i like it.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: onespirit5777 on October 23, 2008, 07:44:26 pm

It show a lot of promise so don't give up

As far as saying anything is a little weird, I have no room to talk! People from the Twilit Zone look at my stuff and say it's strange.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: falloffalot on October 24, 2008, 05:05:09 am

Looking good. I'm with lynn22, some consistancy is needed with your scales. The chair and ceiling height don't look quite right.
As for the lights, I think they look pretty good, a little futuristic with them raised difusers and if you plan on having the ceiling lights on, make sure your shadows suit accordingly. With that many light sources I don't think there would be much in the way of shadows.
Look forward to more pics.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: siragin on October 24, 2008, 02:00:20 pm

actually I'm still not that good with setting up good lights. That's something I really need work on.

Title: Re: office room
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on October 24, 2008, 08:04:17 pm

All you need to do for the lights really, is add a local light inside each box, casting shadows, slightly orange / yellowy, and possibly some infinite lights...

Mabye looking at some real office pictures would give you some idea of various light sources...