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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Darkjesture on September 20, 2008, 10:24:49 pm

Title: My first render.
Post by: Darkjesture on September 20, 2008, 10:24:49 pm

This is my first render with the scene manager...  :-\
(http://basic4gl.wikispaces.com/space/showimage/Cube.jpg)
What do ya think? (i know its basic)

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: falloffalot on September 21, 2008, 04:13:34 am

Nice. I would play around with the camera angles to get better views.
Great for your 1st render though.  :)

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: headwax on September 21, 2008, 06:47:37 am

It's nice  work , good compostion and the complamentary colours really do a good job. Crit is the background, that diagonal horizon might be better straight.

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 21, 2008, 01:49:52 pm

Make the background black and add a local light in the center of your object and set the light to no shadows and then try it with shadows/ray trace.

Keep the light you have and just add another light in the center.

Really really nice for you first render.

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: thecolclough on September 22, 2008, 05:45:07 am

very good first render.  licks my first one hollow...

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 22, 2008, 01:21:54 pm

A very distrubing comment there... colclough.

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: thecolclough on September 22, 2008, 05:42:45 pm

sorry, joe... didn't mean to disturb anyone... :P  i think it's probably down to a difference in colloquial interpretations of that figure of speech.  in my dialect, it's basically synonymous with 'kicks the cr** out of'.  i won't ask what it means in your dialect, it sounds like i probably don't want to know :-\

colloquial differences are such a nuisance, eh?  ::)

- c

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 22, 2008, 10:24:55 pm

LOL! You guys are out there

My first render was a sphere with no shadows.

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: VBSmiles on September 23, 2008, 12:00:40 am

Believe my first render was the Eggplant....... Wait, I still make them for testing materials, lighting, ect.  ;D

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: Steve on September 24, 2008, 01:27:21 am

Heh heh.  I can't believe how many people have made eggplants from that tutorial.  And I don't even LIKE eggplant!

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: mcheccyb on September 24, 2008, 12:40:57 pm

there was even a competition on the old anim8or.org to make a stylized eggplant.

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 24, 2008, 12:47:13 pm

Wow... perhaps more of us have created eggplants... than robins!

ooh, now i want to see a ruby robin!

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: VBSmiles on September 24, 2008, 09:17:55 pm

Quote from: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 24, 2008, 12:47:13 pm

Wow... perhaps more of us have created eggplants... than robins!

ooh, now i want to see a ruby robin!

Been there done that . ( didn't come out too cozy though. )

Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 25, 2008, 09:04:47 pm

This is way funny - The topic starts off - "This is my first render, how do you like it."

It ends with a eggplant and ruby robins