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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Lordsage77 on August 27, 2008, 11:50:18 am

Title: First creation
Post by: Lordsage77 on August 27, 2008, 11:50:18 am
My first 3D model ever. Constructive critics always helo :) Bran new to this stuff so dont be *too* harsh ~_^
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: 5L1D3R on August 27, 2008, 02:11:47 pm
Not too bad for a first time, especially with textures and everything.  Most first timers don't texture.  One question though, did you intend the ship to be larger than the planets?
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: Kiji8989 on August 27, 2008, 10:10:40 pm
*claps* Very good! My first creation was a....tube thing...lol
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: Tanzim on August 27, 2008, 10:18:39 pm
The texturing is very good!
Although the planets are a bit bumpy, and the ship could do with some edge reinforcement.

Quite good for a first timer!
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: KiwiNM8OR on August 28, 2008, 03:19:23 am
Cool. Can ya show us some different view points of the spacecraft? Just lower that bottom planet and it will appear to be in the background. Though planets seem round from the right distance they are actually bumpy (mountains, valleys, etc). Well done.
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: Tanzim on August 28, 2008, 09:28:32 am
Yeah, that's true, but the view is from space, "the right distance".
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: spicy on August 29, 2008, 05:25:43 am
Maybe you should subdivide the planets to make it smoother, but a good first model it is! I created a blobby man on my first attempt, good effort and good work, hope to show us the new improved version (If you ever get round to it)
Title: Re: First creation
Post by: almost cool on August 29, 2008, 11:01:18 pm
excellent work!

my first was a cannon out of a cylinder and a cube.hadnt read manual,or known anything.but  that button looked soooo shiny........................................................................

good job tho, b4 i go into space out mode.