i thought the bear looked pretty good. and ive seen so many bird guys its starting to look generic, but atleast you did it ( i never did).
as for the animation.
It look like it was just a sequence. and you should have made it go atleast twice. sometimes it doesnt look good the 1st tine around and looks good the second and vice versa.
i havent had much experience in animation but i know what things are supposed to look like, so you might want to redo that animation.
it looked like the left leg moved alot faster thatn the right leg. wich is great if the bird is a pimp. but if i were you (and this is what i need to do) is practice animations.
do like 5-10 different walk cycles. 5-10 dofferent poses and really as much as you can do. most of this is trial and error.
but it really just takes practice. and sorry to be so critical. i lnow you learned something just making an animation. now you just have to work on perfecting it.
good luck and have fun with your future projects. hopefully you get that bear finished.