Great work dwalcott, really nicely done. The camera movement is excellent and overall the textures and modelling is great. With such short wings relative to its weight, the shuttle does indeed come down pretty damn hard and fast, though not quite at the speed of yours! It relies on a hard stalling manouever in the last moments before touchdown, and you have captured that quite well. In fact, I think your angles are quite good, and if the action was running at one third the speed it would appear very realistic. IMO it's the speed that's the problem, not the geometry.
The parachute deployment is a great touch, very nicely executed. A suggestion for improvement would be to have a cluster of 3 parachutes and to have them "dance" more as the shuttle taxis to a stop. Having the chutes crumple and drop to the ground when the shuttle stops would be a challenge but would look awesome! Excellent work mate.